Fri 10.1.10
EVEN SO
Our cat cries at night for no reason.
A yawl through her one contiguous
room until I find her there she is in
the bathtub looking lost there she is
in the hall. It’s amazing light from
a bulb will find you everywhere
you look its looking back in every
shade and— Imagine color without
a shape. Imagine a wall at the lip
of the visible universe in all directions
equidistant now touch it bowl on top
of bowl a bell and you its clapper.
When I drop our cat she goes right
back to yawling lost along whatever
wall I found her. Sometimes the rock’s
so big you build the house around it.
And because the house is there
the street is there, and all the houses
on the street are there all the people
all the gaps between the people and
the gaps between the gaps are gaping
open oceans learned to hug the land.







October 1st, 2010 at 8:07 am
This is beautiful. Great ending, and there’s such music in the way you build up to it. The only thing I don’t like is the second “imagine”–the repetition of it feels slightly melodramatic.
October 17th, 2010 at 4:16 pm
You write well, it’s an escape to another world!
The written word is very powerful!
October 19th, 2010 at 10:40 am
beautiful! i LOVE those last 3 stanzas.